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November 21, 2012
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An updated version of my previous designs: [link]

Sadly I had to get rid of the wood textures, but other than that, everything has been improved. Design is simplified with cleaner graphic, more focused on content, and I know that there is empty space at bottom, I forgot to fix it in the design.
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~JakubSpitzer Dec 16, 2012  Professional Interface Designer
Great work. I like it!
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:iconlizolb:
I think the backfround is way to blurry, but it has beautiful colours.
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=lefiath Nov 23, 2012  Professional Interface Designer
Thanks. I've picked the blurred version, because normal one was way too distracting. And when it wasn't as blurred, you could still see way too many details so it looked strange. It's better to blur it more, as long as you can see what it is (river). It's true that it might've been less, but it wouldn't make such a difference in the end.
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:iconlizolb:
Ah okay. I do like it, I have not been working so much with web design, but I see a lot of pages eweryday on the job. Some is just so horrible and I just enjoy to see something this nice. :heart:
Some one kill me of all the horrible home pages I have to see on the job. XD

anyway. Great job with this!
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=lefiath Dec 3, 2012  Professional Interface Designer
It's true that DA is mostly filled with rubbish (not that there is anyone to blame, but overall I feel there aren't many designers on DA, definetely compared to illustrators, painters and photographers), if you want to see something more regulated and focused on quality, try [link]
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:iconlizolb:
Ah it looks good. My phone here just looks to not enjoy it but I'll see it more tomorrow in an computer.

CG society is also something I think looks good, I use it as an professional web-portfolio. But you get easy forgotten between the big guys.
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:iconcolorifer:
****** AWARD ******
*** Site of the Day ***
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=lefiath Nov 22, 2012  Professional Interface Designer
Well, thank you very much :)
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Mood: Joy ~laibach0812 Nov 21, 2012  Professional Interface Designer
nice work!
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:iconanton-matyulkov:
Well, I thought I should better keep my mouth shut lol, because the design is cool in overall :)

More suggestions :
x Guess you can't change the logo, but personally i hate the strokes, they could have been done in a much more subtle way or even removed
x At the top of the page you see 6 icons, 5 of them are dark-grey, and facebook icon is colored. that's odd, guess facebook wouldn't have sued you if you made the logo dark-grey as well

And I really like the way you used the fishing hooks there
Good job, dude
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