Sadly I had to get rid of the wood textures, but other than that, everything has been improved. Design is simplified with cleaner graphic, more focused on content, and I know that there is empty space at bottom, I forgot to fix it in the design.
Thanks. I've picked the blurred version, because normal one was way too distracting. And when it wasn't as blurred, you could still see way too many details so it looked strange. It's better to blur it more, as long as you can see what it is (river). It's true that it might've been less, but it wouldn't make such a difference in the end.
Ah okay. I do like it, I have not been working so much with web design, but I see a lot of pages eweryday on the job. Some is just so horrible and I just enjoy to see something this nice. Some one kill me of all the horrible home pages I have to see on the job. XD
It's true that DA is mostly filled with rubbish (not that there is anyone to blame, but overall I feel there aren't many designers on DA, definetely compared to illustrators, painters and photographers), if you want to see something more regulated and focused on quality, try [link]
Well, I thought I should better keep my mouth shut lol, because the design is cool in overall
More suggestions : x Guess you can't change the logo, but personally i hate the strokes, they could have been done in a much more subtle way or even removed x At the top of the page you see 6 icons, 5 of them are dark-grey, and facebook icon is colored. that's odd, guess facebook wouldn't have sued you if you made the logo dark-grey as well
And I really like the way you used the fishing hooks there Good job, dude
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